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If I follow under your wing
Could you sheild it all away?
I cannot take it anymore
I forbid this pain to stay

Rejoicing in your existence
With praises of soothing song
You allow yourself to be my guide
And make me feel like I belong

Blinded by your kindness
And distracted by my attention
You relinquished your free will
And fell for my deception

Weakened in your current state
I can clearly see the cause
I had wasted your soul and vow
And left you hanging in my jaws

Crying deeply for the truth
Of tears born from a lie
How strange is it that
Honesty is kept within the eye
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It's actually a revision of an old poem that I thought was just too simple.
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~Aethenox Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great stuff! I can see the emotion, it gives me images in my mind.
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~xXSukaiKuro13Xx Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that's exactly what I was going for.
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~lskullyl Jan 22, 2013  Student
Your soooo good at poems n stuffs ;-;
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~xXSukaiKuro13Xx Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you, kind sir!
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